One more time,
Let us try.
One more time,
Let us not see why.
One more time,
Let us not hold ourselves back.
One more time,
Let us forget about what we lack.
One more time,
Let us let ourselves be.
One more time,
Let us dream what we can’t see.
One more time,
Let us laugh before we cry.
One more time,
Let us try.
Your words stir the heart, Mia.
Do they reflect a profound and almost desperate plea to make one last effort, or are they a contented coo, satisfied that one more exquisite moment will bring perfection?
Either way, you’ve captured deep, hopeful yearning. Quite a feat, as both interpretations apply. Well done, Mia!
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Thank you so very much, Keith! I really look forward to your comments as they are not only encouraging but also widen my thought horizons. 😄🤗
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This poem was written with the former meaning you guessed. It is about one last effort.
But thank you for showing me another wonderful way that exists too. To relive the good moments! ☺
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Looking back with fondness, Mia, shares much in common with looking forward in eager anticipation. Move a few boxes to the other side of the room, and voila, here you have it!
Your heart fluttered once, then it skipped a moment or two. Your exquisite poetry has restored the rhythm, and the beat grows stronger by the day, pulsing warm vitality…in anticipation.
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You see hope in me. I hope you will one day see happiness too. For that is what I truly hope for. Thank you for the support. 🙂
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“One more time” like a last reminder of what could be, if and only if …
Well said Mia!
We ought to give our best in every relationship. And then let things happen. It’s not the easiest part.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Marie! 😄
Yes, it is not easy. So we had rather take a last chance and give it all we have than regret that we didn’t do so.
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beautiful.
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Thank you so much! 😄
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❤️
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Thank you, Salina. 🙂
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Liked and shared, my wonderful struggling author. And flipped to my “Poetry in Blogs”. I wish you are doing great.
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Thank you so much for being your wonderful self, Outosego! Really appreciated. 😄😄😄
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One more time..
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Indeed! Thank you so much for stopping by, Antony. 🙂
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Thank you so much for this, Outosego! 🙂
Stay safe.
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