When she was with him, he didn’t care.
When she flew by, he started madly chasing her.
He could be anyone. She was Time.
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When she was with him, he didn’t care.
When she flew by, he started madly chasing her.
He could be anyone. She was Time.
A Struggling Author 
Wao. Touching 👌
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Thank you so much, dear Kritika for your feedback! 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Loved this ❤️
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Doree! ❤
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Unexpected ending. Definitely relevant for anyone and everyone. I’m glad you took the time to remind everyone of its importance 🙂
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I’m glad that you put aside your time to read and appreciate my work! Thank you so much, C. D. 🙂
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She’s wicked in an honest way💗
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Well, at least she is herself. 🙃
Thank you so much for your support, Samyak!
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Yeah that’s correct. Nothing beats her resolve 😊
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Yeah. But when she stays, that’s when magic happens! 💫
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It doesn’t. It flows regardless ❣️
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Nah. Time does stop. 😎
https://miawinhertt.wordpress.com/2019/12/10/when-time-stops/
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Ohh wow!! Love and it’s trails have seen me at bay!
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Everything at the right time! 🙃
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To believe in it or not is in a grey shade. Let’s keep writing about it rather💗
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I think, they who don’t believe in it have once loved way too much. Just my opinion…
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Yes. Very true. It’s believed that we’re afraid of “love”
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Don’t worry. One day, we will all be fine. Till then, like you said, we just write.
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You pen things down lavishly. I fall in love with the idea of forging pen and paper together. That’s our story.❣️😍
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Wonderfully creative way of describing it, Mia!
Recalls what my grandmother used to tell us impatient grandchildren – “Be careful never to wish away time.”
As I matured, and realized life doesn’t supply endless tomorrows, her wisdom grows. Now, rather than merely being anxious for today to be finished, I devote mental energy instead for making sure tomorrow is better than ever.
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Wow! What a great advice by your grandma!! 🙂 She was so right and I’m glad to know that you are living up to her words. And now, I get a slice of that wisdom! 😊 I would now try my best to not wish away time. Thank you so much for that, Keith!
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I had to read that a few times. So true, and yet so sad.
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Thank you so much, Rose for sparing your precious time for my writing! 🙂
Yes, it is sad indeed. That is why he should cherish her when she is with him. 🙂
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I always enjoy your writing! Thanks for sharing such a creative poem!
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Really glad to know that! 🤗
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Nice ending.
Time is precious. We should never mess up with her.
Well penned as always Mia. Thank you
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Thank you, Marie for being so kind to me! 🙂
If we mess with her, she sure does have her way of making us regret it.🙃
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This is very touching and nice☘️
And thanks for liking my blog posts. Your blog is definitely worth my follow
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Vincent! 🙂
You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on Fae Corps Inc.
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Thank you so much Pattimouse for the reblog. 🙂
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You were recommended on our indie Wednesday post… Your poetry is really good.
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Thank you so much for that, Patricia! 🙂
I keep trying my best.
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Thanks a ton for your kindness, Gentleman! I really appreciate it!! 🙂🙂🙂
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Lovely words 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind response, Alberto! 🙂
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❤
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wow. so true.Thank you for taking the time to stop by my blog:)
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Thank you so much for your appreciation! 🙂
It was a pleasure to read your work.
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Love the ending !!
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Thank you so much for your feedback! 🙂
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I’ve been thinking about framing one of your tiny tales and hanging it somewhere in my room. That’s one that could definitely do it. Brilliant.
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Thank you so much for your kind thoughts, Antony.
It’s nice to imagine someone doing that with my words. I just hope you would remember to put the right name below it.
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Yes, I do remember but I would probably go for “A struggling author”. It has something magic about it.
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So very poetic there. Excellent work, Mia!
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Thank you so much, Parker for your appreciation! 🙂
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