The last line is a bit unexpected, and as such, it provokes thought. Better yet, it brings the big question – if she has wings, how many of the rest of us do too?
Kudos to her for knowing she has wings, and for taking that final step. Perhaps this example will inspire the rest of us to take inventory of our own attributes.
This made me smile because one of the metaphors God has used to speak to me a lot is jumping off a cliff. It was in one of my dreams too. Beautiful poem!
Lovely π
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Sarika! ππ
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Most welcome π
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That last line is full of hope lol
I took a breath β knowing sheβs wasnβt dying
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I’m so glad that I made you care for her in three lines. πππ
Thank you so very much for your encouragement, Anomaly! π
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Only a pleasure Mia!
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This is beautiful, Mia. π
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Freethinker! π
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Love it! π Your talent shines in these tiny tales!
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Thank you so much for being so supportive, dear Katy! ππ
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Nice, Mia!
The last line is a bit unexpected, and as such, it provokes thought. Better yet, it brings the big question – if she has wings, how many of the rest of us do too?
Kudos to her for knowing she has wings, and for taking that final step. Perhaps this example will inspire the rest of us to take inventory of our own attributes.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Keith! π
All of us have wings. It is just a matter of time before we realize it and use it to our advantage. Our dreams are our wings!
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I Love it!!!
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Thank you so much, dear! π
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Top-notch writing… your work is pure excellence!
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Well, thank you so much for such a generous compliment, Lance! π
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You are so very welcome, Mia!
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A tiny tale told so much…!
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Deeksha! π
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This made me smile because one of the metaphors God has used to speak to me a lot is jumping off a cliff. It was in one of my dreams too. Beautiful poem!
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Glad that you could relate to the tale. Thank you so much for your kind words, Jennifer! π
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Love your blog. Keep writing!!
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, Stefan! π
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