In this moment,
Is unbridled joy,
Unlike any seen,
Is unfathomable despair,
Unlike ever expected.
In this moment,
Something begins,
Making the heart beat faster,
Something ends,
Making everything go blank.
In this moment,
Someone has an orgasm,
Sees paradise,
Someone loses an organ,
Sees hell.
In this moment,
Someone comes back home,
Meets familiar comfort,
Someone touches foreign land,
Meets indifferent strangers.
In this moment,
Someone takes their first breath,
Quite magically,
Someone breathes their last,
Quite effortlessly.
In this moment,
Is everything
We could ever imagine,
Is all
We know as paradise and hell.
you show the raw reality, sometimes cruel in indifference, but at the same time you look at life with hope. My hug, Mia.š
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Well, it is what it is… š
Thank you so much for your honest response, Fernando! Appreciated! š¤š
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What you describe so eloquently is the circle of life and death. Have a wonderful day Mia š
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It is, indeed, & also everything else in between.
Thank you so much for your support, Chris. š
Have a great day too. šš»
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Well crafted poem… so much can happen in just a moment.
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So much, indeed!
Thank you so much for your encouragement, Dave. š
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A very nice portayal of contrasts and extremes. Well done. Keep on writing and I hope you get the recognition you deserve
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Thank you so much for your encouragement & the wonderful positive vibes you keep sending my way, David! Much appreciated! š¤š
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Reminded of Newton’s 3rd law of motion, I agree with you Mia.
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Glad we agree. Thank you so much for stopping by to comment, Zfthrimej. š
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Nicely done, Mia. It captures the essence of life in this moment.
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Thank you so much for sharing your appreciation with me, Terry. š
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Right now it’s everything. Magnificent writing, dear friend.
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Glad you think so! Thank you so much for your continuous support, dear Lincol! š
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Insightfully described; the impartiality of nature, for some it might be unkind, but it is human attachments that hinder us what must be realised.
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Good to know you agree, Michael.
Thank you so much for your kind words. š
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lovely……………….
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Presta. š
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cheers
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Mia, nice elaborating about both sides.
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Glad for your appreciation, Aana! Thanks!! š
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I greatly appreciate and respect your creative energy, which so beautifully reveals your great poetic potential. you’re wonderful!
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Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation, Maxima! Means a lot! š
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