Have you ever felt
Time stopping?
Tick-tock, tick-tock,
Then suddenly nothing?
Have you ever lost track
Of everyone and everything
That goes around
Or comes at you?
Have you ever wondered
If you were still living
In that moment
You had no control over yourself?
Have you ever seen someone,
Some special one,
Who made your heart skip a beat,
Making time stop?
It doesn’t happen often.
It’s usually rare to find.
But if you are lucky with someone,
It could happen with them again.
That moment when time stops,
All stops,
You might forget yourself
But remember the other like that forever.
Love doesn’t ring bells.
Love doesn’t make loud sounds.
Love just nulls out all other noise.
Love makes time stop.
Indeed it does
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There we go!
Thank you so much stopping by, Elana! 🙂
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Nice post
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Thank you so much for your support, Seraja! 🙂
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Ah your welcome you have a beautiful blog
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Well, thank you again! I’m so glad that you found it so. 😀
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Yes it is good job 😍
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Yay! 😇
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😍😍😍
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It’s an emotional paradox that at one place love makes the time stops while on the other hand it makes the time flies like anything when we are with the right person.
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Oh, that is also true. Well-pointed out! Thank you so much for your input, Yash. 🙂
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Very true Mia.
I love the way you built up this poem. Yes Love got this special power!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Marie! 😀
It’s just one of love’s powers. Thankfully, the good kind! 😅
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“Time knows no logic when I’m with you.”
Indeed, a twinkle of the eye endures forever, while decades fly by in the merest moment.
Look at my grandparents. Married for over sixty years, yet he still serenaded her with songs that made her heart leap when they first met. They’re both gone now, yet I know they’re out there somewhere, still charming each other.
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Thanks a ton for commenting, Keith! 🙂
Such a sweet story of your grandparents!! 😍 Love that lasts! One that everyone yearns for.
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The ending touched me… beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, Himna! 🙂
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To stop time, to hold time. I believe a wish, most of us made. A wonderful poem Mia.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation, John! 🙂
Yes, it is a wish for some. For others, something they never even imagined could happen, yet it did.
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You are welcome Mia.
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Beautiful 👏
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Thanks a bunch for your appreciation! 😀
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Welcome 🙂😊
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Nice post
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Thank you so much for your appreciation! 🙂
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